My new writing goal

I am very proud of my self because I have achieved my writing goal

My new writing goal

Working on my writing goal.

I have been working on my goal very hard. I can now add some interesting wow words to my story. I am going to keep on doing this. Mrs O dated my goal sheet to show that I am able to add in wow words. I also wrote about my feelings and I described the feeling of the water splashing on my feet. 

My Writing Goal